Question

【题目】红星中学拟于本周五上午8:00在阅览室举行英语读书会(reading circle)活动。假设你是高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr. Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加活动。邮件的内容包括：

1.介绍读书活动的相关信息；

2.说明你发出邀请的原因；

3.询问对方的意向。

注意： 1. 词数不少于100词；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Black,

__________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Black,

I hope that everything goes on well with you. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school. We’ll feel honored if you are present.

The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. this Friday in the reading-room. Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.

As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.

Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us? Thank you in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一封邀请信，要求考生根据题目所列出的要点给外教Mr. Black写一份邀请函。该类作文可分四段来写，第一段表明邀请的目的和所要参与的活动；第二段介绍该活动的相关信息，包括举办时间、地点、参加的人员等；第三段表明邀请的原因；第四段询问所邀请人的意向，并要求尽快回复。考生在进行写作的时候，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，内容齐全，语言精练，布局合理，同时使用高级句型。I hope that everything goes on well with you.宾语从句用在句中；We’ll feel honored if you are present. If引导条件状语从句；Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.现在分词在句中作状语；As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us. 原因状语从句和宾语从句完美结合。