题目内容
2.假定你是李华,你所在的城市为了治理交通堵塞的问题,推出了公共自行车租借活动,得到人们认可,但是因为种种原因,真正租借的人很少.针对这一情况,请用英语给主管部门写一封信,提出改进措施.1.简化租借程序,方便为主.
2.多修自行车专用道路.
3.号召人们保护环境.
生词:过程,程序 process n.
注意:1.词数100左右.
2.可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.开头和结尾已写出,不计入总词数.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am glad to find that more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.Look forward to seeing more and more people travel by bicycle.
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一封英语书信.写作要点包括:1.简化租借程序,方便为主.2.多修自行车专用道路.3.号召人们保护环境.写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
重点词汇:provide(提供);first of all(首先);for example(例如);simplify (简化);so that (以便);convenient(方便的);traffic jam(交通拥挤,交通堵塞);call on sb to do sth(号召某人做某事)
高分句型:1.For example,simplify the renting process ①so that people will find ②it convenient to do so.
so that 引导一个目的状语从句;②it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的不定式短语to do so.
2.Finally,I think we should call on people ①to protect the environment,②for riding a bicycle is definitely environmentally friendly.
①不定式短语在句中做目的状语;②介词短语在句中表原因.
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I am glad to find that more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent.However,few people would like to rent a bicycle because it is not easy to rent one.So I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve the situation.
First of all,you should make it easy for people to rent a bicycle.For example,simplify the renting process so that people will find it convenient to do so(高分句型一).Second,more bicycles-only roads should be built to make sure that cyclists can't be caught in a traffic jam.Finally,I think we should call on people to protect the environment,for riding a bicycle is definitely environmentally friendly(高分句型二).
Thank you for considering my suggestion.Look forward to seeing more and more people travel by bicycle.
Yours
Li Hua
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全,关键短语和句型要写对,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,还要注意人称和时态使用要正确.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,合理安排写作结构,平时注意积累词汇及语法知识.
![](http://thumb.zyjl.cn/images/loading.gif)