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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Recently, our class have a heated discussion about Charles Gray, an ex-millionaire, who has turned his back on his millions and find different ways to be happy in her life.

Some students thought he was wrong to give up his huge house and $2 millions. Without money, his life would be like to be hard. In fact, it is money who has the most important role to play in happy life.

Other didn’t agree with this point of view. They thought Charles was happy live in a small dormitory where there was only a second-hand furniture. It was very great of him to be determined to give all his money out to charities. They believed people which had only a little money were freer and much happier.

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文章大意：文章主要讲述班级学生对前百万富翁舍弃了他的百万财富这件事进行热烈的讨论。

第一处：时态用法错误。根据前句可知，这里用现在完成时。句意：他舍弃了他的百万财富。故将find改为found。

第二处：代词用法错误。根据前面的his可知，这里同样用his。句意：在他的生活中找到了不同的快乐的方式。故将her改为his。

第三处：数词用法错误。如果在million前面加数字的话,则million是不可以加s的。句意：一些学生认为，他放弃豪宅和200万美元是错误的。故将millions改为million。

第四处：短语用法错误。短语be likely to有可能。句意：没有钱，他的生活可能会很艰难。故将like改为likely。

第五处：强调句用法错误。强调主语money，故用that引导强调句。句意：幸福生活中最重要的是金钱。故将who改为that。

第六处：代词用法错误。other是除自己外的“别人”，others是指其他人。句意：其他人不同意此观点。故将other改为others。

第七处：短语用法错误。be happy to do做某事很高兴。句意：他们认为查尔斯很乐意住在一间小宿舍里。故在happy后加to。

第八处：冠词用法错误。名词furniture为不可数名词，故不需要用冠词。句意：那里只有二手家具。故将a去掉。

第九处：短语用法错误。give away捐赠。句意：他决心把所有的钱都捐给慈善机构。故将out改为away。

第十处：定语从句用法错误。句中先行词为people，在从句中作主语，故用关系代词who/that。句意：他们相信只有一点点钱的人更自由，更快乐。故将which改为who/that。