题目内容

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great pain at that moment but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over． Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn't tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates． As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse．Now I know I am wrong．we can tell other our need for help and accept their help．someday we can help him in return．In this way, we can get along with each other happily and peacefully．

 

【答案】

 

 while改为when 

 hurted改为 hurt

 nothing后面加had

 walk改为walking

 去掉but

 the改为a

 on改成in

 am改成was

 other改为others

 him改为them

【解析】

试题分析：本文记叙了作者上体育课时不小心摔伤了脚，但是为了不向同学求助却一直强忍着，结果情况越来越糟糕，从而作者明白：遇难时可以寻求帮助，接受帮助，终有一天也可以帮助别人，这样人际关系会更和谐。

 while改为when，while后面的谓语动词要使用延续性动词，本句后面的动词fall down是一个短暂性动词，故使用when来连接。

 hurted改为 hurt，本句中的动词hurt的过去式和过去分词和原形是一样的。

 nothing后面加had，as if后面接虚拟语气，和过去相反的情况用过去完成时。

 walk改为walking，固定搭配have some difficulty doing sth做某事有困难。

 去掉but，连词though不能与but连用。

 the改为a，固定搭配as a result结果是。

 on改成in，句意：我脚上的伤更严重了。伤是在脚的里面

 am改成was，现在我知道自己错了，是过去错了，用一般过去时

 other改为others，这里的others是名词其他人，指告诉其他人我们的要求。

 him改为them，这里的them是指上句的others，故使用复数形式。

考点：考查短文改错

 

练习册系列答案
相关题目


第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：短文改错（共8小题，每小题1分，满分8分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有8处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
　　　2.只允许修改8处，多者（从第9处起）不给分。
One day I deeply felt the deep mother love surrounding me. I went to home for lunch quickly after school, because there would be a exam in the afternoon and I had expected to return to school early to prepare for the exam. And when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt very happy. When two dishes were seen, I found neither I liked. I ran out of my house angry and walked on the street for a while. Then I walk to school. When I got into the classroom, one classmates told me that my mother had brought my lunch box here. After opened the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes were filling with tears.

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
John was visiting he 90-year-old grandpa, who lived in the country. In the first morning of the visit, John grandpa prepared a breakfast of bacon and eggs. John noticed some dirt on his plate, and asks, “Are these plate clean?” His grandpa replied, “They’re as cleaner as cold water can get them. Just go ahead and finish your meal.” For lunch, Grandpa made hamburgers. Again, John has found the plates were dirty, but he asked the same question. Without looking up, his grandpa gave same answer. Later, as John was left, his grandpa’s dog started to growl(咆哮), and wouldn’t let him pass. Grandpa shouted at the dog, “Cold Water, go lie down!”

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An old man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes, the bus arrived but did not stop. The man who thought it would stop a bit far so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he realized that he arrived home. The man was so happy that he could save a bit money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until arriving home. I didn’t have to pay the fee. “Surprisingly, the wife blamed his husband,” Do you know how many you could save, if you ran after a taxi ? ”

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误极其修改均仅限一词。
2.只需要修改8处,多者(从第9处起)不记分。
I love camping. It’s my favorite way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had ever had. We slept in a tent and had a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food tasted well. During a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard gentle wind to blow in the trees, and I felt such peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp, and I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I used to feeling pressured to do well in exams. I was such afraid of falling behind that I kept thinking about studying every minute of the day. The pressure makes me out of breath.

To my disappointed, the more worried I was about my studies, the less effective I became. Later, I realized I just took pressure too serious. So I tried taking things easy by taking part in various activity out of class, enjoying music and even daydreaming about fun things. To my delight, this worked! Gradually，I became more anxious about exams and began to take pleasure in my studies. Pressure cannot avoided.

What counts is how to deal with properly, but above all, how to turn it into pleasure or challenge.

 

违法和不良信息举报电话：027-86699610 举报邮箱：58377363@163.com

精英家教网