Question

【题目】假设你是李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；

2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。

参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）

注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles".

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning , everyone,

I’m Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “Let’s ride bicycle”.

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems, such as air pollution and traffic jams .

How can we solve the problems then ? As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy –saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health .

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲 稿，主要内容包括：1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。

【亮点说明】

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life.非限制性定语从句和现在分词做结果状语堪称经典结合；As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution.固定句式和动名词作定语运用恰到好处；let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !祈使句简洁明了；另外However, For one thing, For another, What’s more, Therefore,显得文章结构严谨，层次分明，段落清晰，不拘一格。