题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍你在一月份观看月全食的完整过程,并以“ A Memorable Experience”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 词数不少于 60。
提示词: 月全食 a total lunar eclipse
A Memorable Experience
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【答案】A Memorable Experience
I was really lucky to witness a total lunar eclipse in January, a rare occurrence and natural wonder.
More importantly, I’ ve developed an interest in astronomy ever since.
One day, I was watching TV with my parents when I learned a total lunar eclipse would occur the next
week. The photos of previous occasions in the news report fueled my curiosity. To have a better
understanding, I attended a professional lecture about the eclipse at the weekend in the community library,listening to an explicit introduction. Back at home, I searched online for more relevant information.
Finally came the big moment. Excited and amazed, I watched the eclipse with my parents and neighbors.We took photos with cellphones or cameras to record this breathtaking scene. The next day, my classmates and I shared our photos shot from different angles, having a lot of fun.
What a wonderful experience! I admired a magical beauty and accumulated astronomical knowledge.
【解析】试题分析:本文是看图作文。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍你在一月份观看月全食的完整过程,并以“ A Memorable Experience”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。写作时要根据所给图画,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据图画内容并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是看图作文,文章内容紧扣主题,思路清晰,语句通顺,文中使用高级词汇和句子。I was watching TV with my parents when I learned a total lunar eclipse would occur the next句中when引导时间状语从句;To have a better
understanding, I attended a professional lecture about the eclipse at the weekend in the community library,listening to an explicit introduction.动词不定式做目的状语,现在分词做伴随状态;Excited and amazed, I watched the eclipse with my parents and neighbors.此处是过去分词作状语;What a wonderful experience!感叹句运用巧妙。