Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解除这个困扰。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Fang,

I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. As you said, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the college entrance examination.

First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents, who just want the best for you. Second, I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up. Third, you should arrange time properly. As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby, your teachers and parents will surely not oppose you to play it.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是书信类作文。假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解除这个困扰。考生在写作时要注意信的开头要开门见山说明写信的目的，然后再根据要点展开行文。本文没有给出具体的要点，因此考生可以发挥的内容是可以根据自己的认识提出相关的建议。同时因为这是一封建议信，所以在写作时还要考虑到语气不要过于生硬，要委婉礼貌，要有可接受性。此外，写作时还要注意文章的时态使用一般现在时，用第一人。写作时注意多使用高级词汇和多种句式，选用合适的连接词或者过渡词，提高文章的可读性，让文章连贯流畅。写作完成必须认真查验是否有拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好句子： …you are faced with使用了被动语态；As you said,…使用了定语从句；…suggest you give up playing volleyball…使用了虚拟语气；…who just want the best for you.使用了定语从句；spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up使用了非谓语动词作定语；…As long as you can make a balance…使用条件状语从句。同时过渡词First of all…Second…Third的使用使文章层次分明，增强了文章的流畅性。