Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你了解到国际部学生对首次乘天宫Ⅱ号做太空探索的宇航员陈东很感兴趣，因此你邀请了陈东近期到你校做一次演讲。请你用英文给国际部的学生写一封邮件并发到班级公邮，项同学们告知此事。内容包括：

1.事由；

2.告知演讲的相关信息（例如：时间、地点等）；

3.欢迎参加。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hello, everybody!

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everybody!

I am Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union in our school. I’ve heard that most students in our International Department are interested in the astronaut, Chen Dong, a crew member of China’s manned spacecraft on board Shenzhou XI, and have a strong desire to know something more about him. To satisfy your thirst, we plan to organize a speech delivered by him.

As scheduled, the activity will be held in our school hall on December 12th. It will start from 14:30 and last for 2 hours. The lecture is supposed to be a great source of encouragement to you, which surely won’t make you disappointed. So it’s really something you can’t miss.

Whoever is interested in it is welcome to be present on time.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给国际部的学生写一封邮件并发到班级公邮，向同学们告知首次乘天宫Ⅱ号做太空探索的宇航员陈东近期会到校做一次演讲。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，完整叙述三方面主要内容。(2)人称。(3)时态：一般将来时和一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：不定式做状语To satisfy your thirst, we plan to organize a speech delivered by him.；一般将来时的被动语态As scheduled, the activity will be held in our school hall on December 12th.。非限制性定语从句The lecture is supposed to be a great source of encouragement to you, which surely won’t make you disappointed.；主语从句的使用Whoever is interested in it is welcome to be present on time.2..使用了重要短语：be interested in对…感兴趣；be supposed to应该；on time按时。