Question

【题目】English weekly 向高一学生征文，主题是：“三年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想写一篇80字左右的征文，你的作文应含有：

1．学校，学习生活

2．业余生活

3．未来职业畅想

可适当添加情节以使行文完整

书写要求：字迹干净，全面整洁，给人以美感。

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Answer 1

【答案】I often imagine what my life will be in three years. I will be admitted to Tsinghua University, and my dream major will be English Literature because I fancy studying English, and I have a good knowledge of English.

Speaking of my leisure time, I will make full use of it to improve myself, such as taking regular exercises and reading more books in the library to keep physically and mentally healthy. I’ll have more time to do whatever I like. Traveling around the country is also one of my dreams, because it can broaden my horizons.

When it comes to my dream job, I expect to be a website designer for the following reasons: First, it is obvious that the Internet has become a part of modern life. I will make contributions to the progress of society for being a website designer. Second, I’m keen on computers and designing, which will support me to go through any difficulties.

【解析】　　这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。主要是想象自己未来生活的，包括学校学习生活，业余生活，未来职业畅想的。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般将来时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 因为是要描写三年后的自己，所以要根据现状以及自己的愿望，学习，业余生活与职业畅想要符合逻辑，结合自身实际，写出具有说服力的要点。

【范文亮点】

　一、二、三段分别从学习、业余生活以及工作设想三个方面展开叙述，要点清晰明了，层次分明。

2.采用了状语从句（Traveling around the country is also one of my dreams, because it can broaden my horizons.）和主语从句（what my life will be in three years.）等高级句式。

3.采用了be admitted to ；speaking of ；make full use of；such as ；when it comes to ；make contributions to；go through 等高级短语，使文章富有亮点。