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2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I'm a middle school student.My name is Li Ming.I am fifteen year old.I'm going to have a very big and important exam in June,that will be a turning point in my life.Although my school work is very busy,but I still spend some free time listen to music.It makes me feel relaxing.I don't have many hobbies,but I can play piano pretty well.When I feel sadly or lonely,I am going to play a little piece of the music.
    My grades are just so so,but I was not worried.My parents always say that I'm lazy.Actually I just like to live on my own way.
That's me,not smart,but kind,not beautiful,but outgoing.I enjoy her original lifestyle.

分析 本文是作者李明写的一篇自我介绍;文中主要介绍了他的身份,姓名,年龄,在学校里的学习情况,兴趣爱好,学习成绩以生活方式等.

解答 I'm a middle school student.My name is Li Ming.I am
fifteenyearold.I'm going to have a very big and important
exam in June,that will be a turning point in my life.Although
my school work is very busy,but I still spend some free time
listen to music.It makes me feelrelaxing.I don't have many
hobbies,but I can play∧piano pretty well.When I feel sadly
or lonely,I am going to play a little piece of the music.
    My grades are just so so,but I was not worried.My parents
always say that I'm lazy.Actually I just like to liveonmy own way.
That's me,not smart,but kind,not beautiful,but outgoing.I enjoy
her original lifestyle.
详解:
1.year改为years  考查名词的单复数   此处指的是:15岁,由于year为可数名词;故用它的复数形式years.
2.that改为which    考查关系代词    本句为非限定性的定语从句;先行词exam在该从句中作主语,而that不能用于该类型的定语从句中;故用which.
3.去掉but   考查连词    由于although不能与but连用,在同一个句子中只能出现although,或者but,故去掉but.
4.listen改为listening    考查固定短语   spend…doing意为:花费时间/金钱做某事;此处指的是:花费一些空闲的时间听音乐;故用listening.
5.relaxing改为relaxed   考查过去分词   此处用在系动词feel之后,说明的是某人的情况;故用过去分词relaxed.
6.piano前加the   考查固定短语    play the piano 意为:弹钢琴;故在piano前加the.  
7.sadly改为sad   考查形容词   此处与形容词 lonely一起在when引导的从句中作表语;故用形容词sad.
8.was改为is  考查时态   根据前后句都使用了一般现在时可知,此处介绍的是作者现在的情况,故用is.
9.on改为in   考查固定短语   in one's own way意为:以某人自己的方式;故用in.
10.her改为my   考查句意理解以及人称代词的一致性    本句的意思是:我喜欢我原来的生活方式;此处用来修饰名词短语original lifestyle,指的是:我原来的生活方式;故用my.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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