Question

假如你是某外国语学校高三学生李华。近来，你发现很多同学课间休息时间坐在教室里学习。请你根据以下提示，用英语写信给校长反映这一问题，并呼吁同学们注意学习效率。

1. 反映问题；

2. 你的看法；

3. 你的建议(至少两点)。

注意：

1. 词数100-120；

2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

3. 信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. __________________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. At present, many students stay in the classroom to study during the ten-minute break between classes.

In my opinion, it is very important to take a break between classes. Otherwise students will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we can do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more exhausted. So relaxation in that period is really of great benefit to us.

As far as I’m concerned, to study effectively, we should combine our study with amusement; meanwhile, doing some sports is also a good way. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Only in this way will we be able to study effectively.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇半开放性的作文。关于学生在课间休息时间做作业。首先要说明这个问题，接下来要说明你的看法，从考试压力大，学习任务重，老师要求高几个方面入手；着重谈这个现象的危害，不利于准备下一节课，不利于提高课堂效率。你的看法应该是在课间就是要休息调整，不能整天就是学习。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文对考生的要求较高，要求考生自行组织要点，再运用合适的连接词来连接全文。在文章的润色方面注意使用高级词汇和高级句型来提升文章的层次和文采。