Question

假如你是某外国语学校高三学生李华。近来，你发现很多同学课间休息时间坐在教室里学习。请你根据以下提示，用英语写信给校长反映这一问题，并呼吁同学们注意学习效率。

1. 反映问题；

2. 你的看法；

3. 你的建议(至少两点)。

注意：

1. 词数120左右；

2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

3. 信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. ___________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. At present, many students stay in the classroom to study during the ten-minute break between classes.

In my opinion, it is very important to take a break between classes. Otherwise students will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we can do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more exhausted. So relaxation in that period is really of great benefit to us.

As far as I’m concerned, to study effectively, we should combine our study with amusement; meanwhile, doing some sports is also a good way. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Only in this way will we be able to study effectively.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文考查了半开放性作文，本文只给出了一个话题，关于课间很多学生都在认真学习而不愿意休息。你认为这种做法是不明智的，因为课间就是让学生休息调整的，如果课间不休息，会大大影响上课的效率，反而是得不偿失。你的建议是不仅仅课间要休息，而且还要好好休息。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文的难度在于谋篇布局，要根据题目要求作出合理的布局分段，在在试题分析里，已经把文章分析了，在写作的使用要注意语法规则的合理运用，要选择合适的高级词汇和连接词让文章成为整体，变换使用多种句型，让文章更有变化。