题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你在网上看到在你市工作的英国人Rose发布的广告,说她想找一个陪跑教练,并且愿意为此支付费用。你很感兴趣,请给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.自我介绍。
2.询问相关事宜(至少两点)。
3.希望被录用。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:陪跑教练running companion
Dear Rose,
I’m Li Hua,a 26-year-old man working as a professional bodybuilding trainer.________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Rose,
I’m Li Hua,a 26-year-old man working as a professional bodybuilding trainer.Having read your advertisement on the Internet,I am interested and writing to be your running companion.
I have many advantages.For one thing,I happen to be in the same city with you.For another,I have years of experience in fitness training,so I know what works best for you.
I'd like to know something more about it.Would you please tell me when and where I have to go and run with you and how long the running lasts each time?Besides,how much can I get paid each time?
Considering my rich experience,I believe I'm your best choice.I do hope to be accepted.Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】书面表达的解题思路:
1.确定文章的体裁,本题所要求写的书面表达是电子邮件,那么首先就需要知晓电子邮件的写作特点。
2.确定文章时态的基调,确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否,本题短文的时态应以一般现在时为主。
3.给文章划分基本段落,仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示,领会要写的文章的主题,确定文章的段落,写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有:①.写邮件的目的;②.介绍自己及询问事宜;③.希望被录用。这样确定文章的基本段落分为三段。
4.尝试用高级词汇,使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构,也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。
5.连句成篇,在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。
【范文亮点】
文中恰当的使用了连词,For one thing,…for another,…;besides等。
1.Would you please tell me when and where I have to go and run with you and how long the running lasts each time?
句意:你能告诉我什么时候和在哪里和你一起跑步吗?每次跑步持续多久?
句中and连接两个并列的宾语从句:when and where I have to go and run with you和how long the running lasts each time。
2. Considering my rich experience, I believe I'm your best choice.
句意:考虑到我的丰富经验,我相信我是你最好的选择。
considering my rich experience是分词短语作状语,I'm your best choice是宾语从句。