Question

16．假如你是李华，你校将举办中学生文化艺术节，请给你的英国朋友Peter写信，邀请他参加这次艺术节并请他表演一个节目．信的内容包括：
1．演出地点、时间及参加人员；
2．介绍艺术节主题：弘扬传统文化，促进文化交流．
注意：1．词数：100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：中学生文化艺术节the Middle School Art Festival
承办 host     弘扬 carry forward
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）Here comes a piece of good news appealing to you．The Middle School Art Festival hosted by our school is drawing near．
The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange．And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二）Next Friday，on the 30th of June，the festival will be held in the Shiyu Building．All of us students will take part in it．I sincerely hope that you can join us in our performance．By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）
All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your family．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你校将举办中学生文化艺术节，请给你的英国朋友Peter写信，邀请他参加这次艺术节并请他表演一个节目，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：演出地点、时间及参加人员；介绍艺术节主题：弘扬传统文化，促进文化交流．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：appeal to吸引；promote cultural exchange促进文化交流；take part in参加；By the way顺便说一下；satisfy our curiosity满足我们的好奇心
I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）
And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二）
By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       How is everything going？I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）Here comes a piece of good news appealing to you．The Middle School Art Festival hosted by our school is drawing near．
       The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange．And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二） Next Friday，on the 30th of June，the festival will be held in the Shiyu Building．All of us students will take part in it．I sincerely hope that you can join us in our performance．By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）
       All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your family．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．