Question

17．假定你是李华．在校报英语专栏看到了学校"英语文化节"的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件．
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival，which will be held on June 15-17，2015，is now looking for 20student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate．If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms．Chen at  chenlaoshi@aef．com．
写作要点：
1．表示写信意图；
2．陈述应征目的；
3．说明应征条件（性格、能力等）．
写作要求：
1．邮件词数不少于100；
2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯
4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
Dear MS Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．
As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as the assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration．   
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本作文为书信，书信格式已在题目中已提供．考生需根据所列出的提纲回信，内容应包括提纲里的内容．时态为一般将来时和一般现在时．人称为第一人称．重要短语：apply for（申请），obtain this precious opportunity （获得宝贵机会），get along well with（与…..相处），have a good command of（掌握，精通），lend a helping hand to（帮助），live up to your expectations（达到预期要求）．

解答 Dear Ms Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（意图）
      I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．（目的）
  As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as the assistant to my English teacher．【高分句型】Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．（条件）【高分句型】
      I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration．
     Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                         Yours truly，
                                                                           Li Hua

点评 书信类作文还要注意书信格式．提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作逻辑循序是否合理．写作方面，考生在平时需注意积累短语和重要句型，可以根据话题来对短语进行归类，比如环保类题材，书信类题材，议论问体等等，这样写作文要用到时就能信手拈来，写出好文章来．