Question

【题目】在现代社会，广告无处不在，人们对此褒贬不一。请你用英语简单描述下表中的两种观点，并谈谈你自己的看法。

赞成者	反对者	你的观点
1、及时了解新产品； 2、拓展对商品的选择； 3、看广告也是一种艺术享受。	1、看电视时插播广告使人非常烦恼； 2、被虚假广告欺骗。	1、…… 2、……

注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.可适当増加细节，以使行文连贯。

Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear in newspapers, broadcasts as well as magazines.

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear in newspapers, broadcasts as well as magazines. Different people hold different opinions on the topic.

Some people who are in favor of the idea hold the view that advertisements can benefit them. First of all, advertisements can keep them informed of new goods in time. Besides, they can have a wide choice of goods. Third, sometimes watching good advertising is a great enjoyment.

On the contrary, some people are against and they think on one hand, some people feel annoyed to be interrupted when they are watching TV. On the other hand, they often fall for false advertisements.

As far as I’m concerned, we mustn’t be a slave to them. We should learn to become a wise person when facing different advertisements.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于议论文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇一分为二的议论文；在现代社会，广告无处不在，人们对此褒贬不一，你用英语简单描述下表中的两种观点，并谈谈你自己的看法；内容包括赞成者的观点——及时了解新产品，拓展对商品的选择，看广告也是一种艺术享受；反对者的观点——看电视时插播广告使人非常烦恼，被虚假广告欺骗以及自己的观点。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be in favor of（支持），benefit（使受益），keep sb. informed of sth.（让某人了解某事），in time（及时），have a wide choice of（有宽广的选择性），be against（反对），feel annoyed（感到烦恼的），be interrupted（被打扰），false advertisements（虚假广告）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句和同位语从句Some people who are in favor of the idea hold the view that advertisements can benefit them.；时间状语从句Some people feel annoyed to be interrupted when they are watching TV.及状语从句的省略We should learn to become a wise person when facing different advertisements.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，First of all，besides，on the contrary，on the other hand，as far as I’m concerned的运用使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。