假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在该词下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
Harmony is very important to our society．All of us are looking forward to live in a harmonious
society．As students，I thought we should first keep our dormitories with harmony．For one thing，it can
create a good environment for my studies and life．For other，it can help us grow healthily．Unfortunately，there are some way to make our dormitories harmonious．Firstly，we should learn to understand each other and solve everything in the peace．Secondly，we should try to get rid our own bad habits．Lastly，we should share or get on with each other．

分析本文主要介绍和谐对我们社会的重要性．首先，和谐能为我们的学习和生活创造一个好的环境；其次，和谐能帮助我们健康地成长．

解答 Harmony is very important to our society．All of us are looking forward to live in a harmonious
society．As students，I thought we should first keep our dormitories with harmony．For one thing，it can
create a good environment for my studies and life．For other，it can help us grow healthily．Unfortunately，there are some way to make our dormitories harmonious．Firstly，we should learn to understand each other and solve everything in the peace．Secondly，we should try to get rid∧our own bad habits．Lastly，we should share or get on with each other．
详解：
1．live改为living 考查动名词．to是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
2．thought改为think 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
3．with改为in 考查介词．in harmony意为"协调一致（相符合）"，是固定搭配．
4．my改为our 考查代词．全文用"我们"表示泛指，此处用代词our．
5．other改为another 考查固定搭配．for one thing…for another …意为"一则…再则；首先…其次"，是固定搭配．
6．Unfortunately改为Fortunately 考查副词．根据句意：幸运的是，有一些使我们的寝室和谐的方法．用副词fortunately．
7．way改为ways 考查名词复数．way是可数名词，其前有some修饰时用复数形式．
8．去掉the 考查固定搭配．in peace意为"平安地，安静地"，是固定搭配．
9．加of 考查固定搭配．get rid of意为"除掉，去掉"，是固定搭配．
10．or改为and 考查连词．share和get on with是并列谓语，用连词and连接．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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15．-I think you should phone Jenny and say sorry to her．
-______．It was her fault．（　　）

12．Helge and Kari Farsund，who live in Oslo，Norway，have been a couple for 50 years． Mr Farsund worrked as an engineer，while his wife was an intensive-care nurse at one point serving with the Red Cross in Rwanda，helping victims of the violent war in that country．Three years ago，a personal tragedy struck，when Mrs Farsund was found to have developed Alzheimer's（老年痴呆）．'As the condition became worse，Mr Farsund began looking for a system that could help both of them live as normal a life as possible． He came across the healthcare technology company Abilia，which has come up with just such a network．
At the center\of the system is an iPad-like device． The screen has Skype，which allows carers to regularly check in with patients． It also has a planner for patients or carers to record up-coming events and provides spoken reminders about daily tasks，such as when they need to take medicine．
Some l，000 people now have the system installed in their homes，and 25 of them，including the Farsunds，are testing the latest version，which combines the screen with wirelessly connected sensors． The motion sensors know if you are in the room or open a door，and send out alarms，for instance，if the stove（电炉） is left on for more than 15 minutes or a per．son opens a door in the middle of the night． The second is a particular issue in Oslo，where sub-zero winters mean some Alzheimer's patients are freezing to death．
"With．this kind of system，it allows people to ta ke care of themselves，which is the most important thing，"says vice president Oystein Johnsen． For him，any move to improve city life needs to begin with people．"Smart cities are coming and they need to start with individuals in their own home，"he says．"It also saves the govemment money． In Norway it cost￡100，000 per year to have someone in a home，while this system costs 15，000． That is a lot of money to save．"
25．Which section of BBC news is most likely to．include this passage？B
A． Health．
B． Technology．
C． Entertainment．
D． Business．
26．The case of Helge and Kari Farsund in the first paragraph serves toA．
A．introduce the main topic
B． expose a social problem
C． show sympathy to the elderly
D． arouse medical workers'interest
27．Which of the following functions can all be performed by the system？D
①To warn people of possible dangers．
②To help check in with patients．
③To offer people some medicine．
④To cure people of Alzheimer's．
⑤To remind people of daily tasks．
⑥To play movies like an iPad．
A．②③⑤
B．①④⑥
C．③④⑤
D．①②⑤
28．According to the last paragraph，Oystein Johnsen will approve thatB．
A．the system should reduce its cost
B．smart cities should be human-based
C．mass production is still impossible
D．individuals are responsible for future．

19．2009年教育进展国际评估组织对全球21个国家进行的调查结果显示，中国孩子的计算能力排名第一，想象力排名倒数第一，创造力排名倒数第五．
请你写一篇题目为"Imagination and Creativity Among Chinese Students"的短文．在文中请分析造成这种现象的原因并提出提高想象力和创造力的方法．
要求：
1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域．
2．短文词数120左右（不含已写好的部分）．
3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯．
4．书写须清晰、工整．
5．短文中不能体现本人真实信息．

9．_______ difficulties we may come across，we will help one another to overcome them．（　　）

16．Dog Fancy
Cover Price：59.88    Price：12.00 （ 1.00/issue）
Details：
Dog Fancy is information driven and provides opportunity for reader interaction．Every issue includes a fold-out four-color poster．Your complete guide helps you better understand，care for and enjoy your dog．
Dog for Kids
Cover Price：23.94   Price：12.99 （2.17/issue）
Details：
Dogs for Kids offers interactive and educational activities，which is intended for children （ages 8to 12）who love dogs and puppies．Each full-color issue has training tips，fun activities to do with dogs，games，puzzles and posters．Dogs for Kids has received the Maxwell Award for Special Interest Magazines from the Dog Writer's of America for 2years in a row．
The Bark
Cover Price：19.80    Price：15.00 （ 2.50/issue）
Details：
The Bark magazine is designed to include everything related to dog culture．Each issue includes stories，essays，poetry，reviews，interviews and artwork related to the relationship between humans and dogs．The Bark is not a how-to-care-for-your-dog magazine．It's a magazine about living with dogs，which is your magazine：touching，smart and simply wonderful．
Dog World
Cover Price：48.88    Price：15.00 （1.25/issue）
Details：
Dog World is written for the dog enthusiasts，including professionals in the pet industry．Articles entertain and educate readers about dog health-care，nutrition，appearance，training and behavior and the law．Dog World is a must-read for its devoted，loyal dog-loving readers．

13．Who would be most interested in the above magazines？C
A．Wildlife protectors．
B．Story book writers．
C．Pet dog owners．
D．City zoo managers．
14．Which magazine saves most？A
A．Dog Fancy．
B．Dogs for Kids．
C．The Bark．
D．Dog World．
15．The underlined word"enthusiasts"in the last part meansD．
A．主人
B．兽医
C．专家
D．狂热者．

13．How cool can libraries be in an era of iPods and Kindles？More than you think．Only if you know where to go．
Central Library：Seattle，Washington，United States
The Central Library in Seattle is modern and fashionable and has tourists from around the world paying visits and taking tours．It was designed by Dutch architect Rem Koolhaas and American designer Joshua Ramus．Tours began in 2006，two years after its opening．The library holds various art exhibitions，book signings and other events，while visitors can stop by the Chocolate cart for a coffee and scan through the gift shop anytime．
Trinity College Library：Dublin，Ireland
The Trinity College Library in Dublin is the oldest library in Ireland，founded in 1592by Queen Elizabeth I．It is the largest single library in the world，also known as the Long Room，which contains more than 200，000of the library's oldest books．The Long Room houses one of the oldest harps（竖琴）in Ireland．Dating to the 15th century，the old harp is the model for the symbol foreland．
Geisel Library，University of California：San Diego，United States
At first glance，it looks like a spaceship．Architect William Pereira，who helped design actual space launch facilities at Cape Canaveral in Houston，Texas，designed the library in 1970．It has been featured in sci-fi films，short stories and novels．The library hosts"Dinner in the Library，"which invites readers for cocktails，and also a special speech from distinguished authors．
TU Delft Library：The Netherlands
The library at the Delft University of Technology was constructed in 1997and has more than 862，000books，16，000magazine subscriptions and its own museum．The building itself exists beneath the ground，so you can't really see the actual Library．What makes it interesting is the roof，which is a grassy hill．The roof covers 5，500square meters．And it has become one of the most striking and greenest structures in the area．
25．Which of the four libraries has the longest history？B
A．Central Library   B．Trinity College Library    C．Geisel Library     D．TU Delft Library
26．What makes Geisel Library different from the others is thatC．
A．Queen Elizabeth I founded the library         B．it has a roof of grassy hill
C．famous writers often deliver speeches there
D．it is the largest single library in the world
27．In Central Library，you canB．
A．drink cocktailsB．buy souvenirs
C．enjoy sci-fi films    D．see the old harp．

14．University educators largely think highly of the wonders of teaching through technology．However，critics（41）B whether something is lost when professors and lectures rely too heavily on electronic media or when（42）D with students takes place remotely--in cyberspace （网格空间）（43）C the real space of the classroom．
HansUlrich Gumbrecht，the Professor of Literature at Stanford Universily，is one such critic．"I think this enthusiastic and sometimes childish and （44）A pushing toward the more technology the better，the more websites the better teacher，is very dangerous-is indeed （45）B，"he indicates．
However，Gumbrecht warns that there are few studies either supporting or rejecting the hypothesis （假设） that traditional ways of teaching are （46）A to teaching via the Internet．He says that he could point only to his"feeling tliat real classroom presence should be （47）C"，and emphasizes the need for educators to examine critically where technology （48）A a useful teaching function and where it does not．
Yet，Gumbrecht allows that，for courses in which knowledge transmission is the only purpose，electronic media probably can do the job well enough．Indeed，as a result of the 20th century's knowledge （49）D and the increasing costs of higher education，using technology for the transmission of information is probably （50）C，he admits．However，knowledge transmission should not be the most important function of the university，he maintains，（51）D that universities should be places where people face open questions，places for"intellectual complexity"and"riskful thinking"．
^"We are not about finding or transmitting solutions； we are not about recipes； we are not about making intellectual life easy．Challenging complexity is what （52）A your mind．It is something like intellectual gymnaistics．And this is what makes you a suitable member of the society．"Moreover，discussions in the physical presence of others can lead to the intellectual （53）B．"There's a（an）（54）A change，and you don't know how it happens．Discussions in the physical presence have the capacity of being the（催化別）for such intellectual breakthroughs．The possibility of in-classroom teaching---of letting something happen which cannot happen if you teach by the transmission of'infonnation is its （55）B"

41．A．deny	B question	C object	D comment
42．A．combination	B cooperation	C presentation	D interaction
43．A．more than	B less than	C rather than	D other than
44．A．blind	B tough	C passive	D rough
45．A．impersonal	B disastrous	C illogical	D immoral
46．A．superior	B related	C opposed	D equal
47．A．approved	B reformed	C maintained	D removed
48．A．serves	B conveys	C delivers	D identifies
49．A．evaluation	B evolution	C emission	D explosion
50．A．affordable	B flexible	C inevitable	D predictable
51．A．confirming	B urging	C complaining	D noting
52．A．expands	B limits	C comforts	D awakes
53．A．decline	B innovation	C consequence	D formation
54．A．qualitative	B irregular	C protective	D minor
55．A．criticism	B strength	Cdemonstration	Dinvolvement

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