题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的美国朋友James由于不爱运动、吃垃圾食品上瘾等原因陷入了肥胖的困扰中,非常苦恼,请你通过电子邮件给他提一些建议和意见,帮助他减肥。
注意:1.词数:100左右(开头和结尾已给出但不计入总词数)
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I have received your e-mail telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food. Now you are worried about gaining weight. If you want to lose weight, what you should first do is find out why you are overweight.
From your e-mail, it seems that there are two reasons: lack of exercise and an unbalanced diet. I have two suggestions. First, set aside time to exercise regularly. Only in this way can you keep slim. Second, eat more healthy food and stay away from junk food. There are stores that specialize in healthy food, which is a little more expensive but can make a big difference.
I hope my suggestions are helpful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
美国朋友James由于不爱运动、吃垃圾食品上瘾等原因陷入了肥胖的困扰中,非常苦恼,要求通过电子邮件给他提一些建议和意见,帮助他减肥。
第一步:根据提示可知,本文是一封建议信。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:taking exercise, be addicted to, lose weight, unbalanced diet, exercise regularly, make a big difference.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。