Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你校英国交换生Peter在邮件中说他被Oxford University录取了，邀清你本周六晚参加庆祝派对，但你那天要参加汉语诗词(poetry)比赛，不能参加派对。请用英语给他回复邮件。

内容主要包括：

1. 表达感谢并祝贺

2. 说明不能参加的原因。

注意：1. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实连贯

2. 词数100左右

Dear Peter

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】DearPeter,

Congratulations on your being admitted to Oxford University!

I’m grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to be held this Saturday evening. However, much to my regret, I have to decline your kind invitation. As you know, a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition, which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening. It’s a great pity that I can’t make it to your party. But I’ve prepared a gift for you and hopefully you will like it. May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封电子邮件：英国交换生Peter在邮件中说他被Oxford University录取了，邀清李华本周六晚参加庆祝派对，但那天要参加汉语诗词比赛，不能参加派对。要求李华给Peter写一封回信。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：admit（录取）, decline(谢绝)，Chinese Poetry Competition（汉语诗词比赛）, enjoy yourself（过的高兴）.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词being admitted, to be invited, to be held. 定语从句which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening. 主语从句that I can’t make it to your party. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。