Question

15．现在整个世界都在提倡以"绿色"为中心的饮食和生活．那么在我们的校园生活中，提倡建设"绿色校园"也是很多师生关注的话题．假定你是学校《校园生活》报的记者，拟以"Create a green campus"为题写一篇相关文章，并把它发表在报纸上．请按照以下提示写一篇120字左右英语文章．
1．建设绿色校园十分重要
　　2．绿色校园指的是…
3．为了建设绿色校园我们应该…

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题作文．写作时，先要提炼要点，包括绿色校园的含义，开展这项活动的背景，活动的意义以及具体的做法．文章是要发出倡议，要以第一人称的语气来讲述，时态要以一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
set goals 确定目标
refer to 指的是
an environmental sense 环保意识
take part in 参与
take sth seriously 认真对待
Green campus not only means creating a green environment on campus，but also refers to the idea that students should be educated to have an environmental sense in their mind．
not only…but also…不但…而且…，连接对等结构；that引导同位语从句修饰ideas．
it is essential for campus to improve students'awareness of environmental protection．
形式主语用法：it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．
Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could"green campus"work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings．
only加状语提前，句子要部分倒装．

解答 参考范文：
                                                                                                                                             Create a Green Campus
"Green campus"is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world．（点出主题）
Green campus not only means creating a green environment on campus，but also refers to the idea that students should be educated to have an environmental sense in their mind．（高分句型一）The creation of"Green campus"will greatly encourage students to take part in various environmental protection activities； most importantly，students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own commitment and responsibility．（说明活动意义）
　　Effective measures should be taken to create a green campus．First，it is essential for campus to improve students'awareness of environmental protection．（高分句型二）Second，campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society，so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities．Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could"green campus"work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings．（高分句型三）（具体做法）

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．