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9．随着网络的发展，网上购物越来越受人们的欢迎．通过网购，人们足不出户，就可以购买到所需要的商品．网购方便，省时，商品丰富选择性多，而且还可以节约出门购物的交通费．但有些人觉得网购也有不利之处：质量没有保证，有可能买到假货；网上付款存在不安全因素；缺少逛实体街的乐趣． 请你以此为话题写一篇120词左右的短文．
参考词汇：网购：shopping on the Internet
                                                              

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
With the development of science and technology，the Internet has come into our everyday life．
随着科学技术的发展，互联网已经进入我们的日常生活．
高分句型二：
Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet，there is still something for us to worry about．
虽然这是在网上购物的方便和快捷，还有一些事让我们担心．

解答 With the development of science and technology，the Internet has come into our everyday life（高分句型一）．It  helps us in many ways．Shopping online is a good example．We can buy the things we want on the Internet without leaving our homes．Shopping on the Internet can save us a lot of time．What's more，the goods may be even cheaper than those in shops．
     Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet，there is still something for us to worry about（高分句型二）．Quality is a big problem．We can't see the goods on the Internet．After all，we can't choose them by ourselves．Besides，lots of advertisements on the Internet are untrustworthy，so sometimes we are easily cheated．
     Therefore，we should be careful while we're enjoying the convenience of high technology．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．