题目内容
9.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词作斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
Dear Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU).We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city.This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai.More than 1000painting will be on show,but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.
As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students,we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition.We would be grateful when you could join them that day.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming.
分析 本文主要讲述作者正在组织城市中的高中学生艺术展,邀请Smith女士参加这次艺术展.
解答 Dear Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU).We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in∧city.This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai.More than 1000painting will be on show,but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.
As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students,we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition.We would be grateful when you could join them that day.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming.
详解:
1.were改为are 考查动词时态.根据句意:我们正在组织城市中的高中学生艺术展.要用现在进行时态.
2.加the 考查冠词.city加定冠词,表示谈话双方都知道的城市,即表示特指.
3.This改为It 考查代词.it 是指exhibition.
4.painting改为paintings 考查名词复数.painting是可数名词,其前有数词修饰时用复数形式.
5.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个单句表示并列关系,而非转折关系.
6.popularly改为popular 考查形容词.be popular with意为"受…欢迎",是固定搭配.
7.去掉for 考查动词用法.invite是及物动词,后直接接名词或代词作宾语,不带介词.
8.when改为if 考查连词.根据句意:如果你能在那天来参加,我们将不胜感激.是条件状语从句,而非时间状语从句.
9.them改为us 考查代词.根据句意:如果你能在那天来参加,我们将不胜感激.应是"加入我们之中".
10.hear改为hearing 考查动名词.to是介词,后接动词时,要用动名词形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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41.A.where | B.that | C.when | D.which |
42.A.happy | B.excited | C.worried | D.calm |
43.A.longer | B.earlier | C.later | D.less |
44.A.stand | B.sit | C.wait | D.look |
45.A.take down | B.get up | C.take up | D.get on |
46.A.employee | B.boss | C.workmate | D.friend |
47.A.answer | B.sound | C.noise | D.voice |
48.A.observe | B.watch | C.see | D.hear |
49.A.that | B.when | C.where | D.which |
50.A.Outside | B.Behind | C.Inside | D.Beyond |
51.A.lie | B.joke | C.fact | D.story |
52.A.took off | B.put on | C.threw away | D.looked at |
53.A.Luckily | B.Quickly | C.Gradually | D.Gladly |
54.A.desks | B.rooms | C.tables | D.offices |
55.A.money | B.fees | C.attention | D.price |
56.A.shouted | B.explained | C.complained | D.replied |
57.A.down | B.in | C.on | D.up |
58.A.arrive | B.leave | C.start | D.disappear |
59.A.that | B.where | C.which | D.as |
60.A.how | B.whether | C.what | D.when |
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37.A.belief | B.need | C.plan | D.dream |
38.A.If | B.As | C.Since | D.Though |
39.A.show | B.meeting | C.lesson | D.test |
40.A.wonderful | B.hopeless | C.successful | D.painful |
41.A.sat | B.sent | C.drove | D.waited |
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45.A.since | B.as | C.while | D.when |
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47.A.mixed | B.held | C.crowded | D.seated |
48.A.Suddenly | B.Finally | C.Later | D.Then |
49.A.disappointed | B.certain | C.angry | D.surprised |
50.A.pleased with | B.interested in | C.prepared for | D.concerned about |
51.A.well | B.hard | C.badly | D.differently |
52.A.stairs | B.stage | C.floor | D.ground |
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54.A.unluckily | B.however | C.actually | D.sadly |
55.A.first | B.best | C.last | D.worst |