题目内容
10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As it is reported in today's 21st Century，a pedestrian was walked down a street when someone dropped litter from a building nearby．Knocked unconscious，the person was sent to a nearest hospital immediately．
The horrible report has set me thinking．Admittedly，we have the right do whatever we want．Besides，violating others'rights is unacceptable．Dropping litter from a high place is impolite and dangerous，that presents a potential threat to many people．If this behavior continue，everyone is likely to suffer from it．
I think the person throwing litter randomly deserves a severe punish．All of us should devote ourselves to improve ur own behavior．Most importantly，laws concerning should be introduced by the authorities．With our joint efforts，our society will surely become good．And I sincerely hope such cases won't happen any more．
分析 文章大意：根据21世纪报的一篇报道，一个行人被从高处扔下的垃圾砸晕，送往医院．作者认为乱扔垃圾的人应该受到严厉的惩罚，我们所有人都应该致力于改善自己的行为，最重要的是，我们的法律应该被授权，我们的共同努力，我们的社会一定会变得很好，我真诚地希望这样的案例不会再发生．
解答 As it is reported in today's 21st Century，a pedestrian was walked down a street when someone dropped litter from a building nearby．Knocked unconscious，the person was sent to a nearest hospital immediately．The horrible report has set me thinking．Admittedly，we have the right∧do whatever we want．Besides，violating others'rights is unacceptable．Dropping litter from a high place is impolite and dangerous，that presents a potential threat to many people．If this behavior continue，everyone is likely to suffer from it．I think the person throwing litter randomly deserves a severe punish．All of us should devote ourselves to improve our own behavior．Most importantly，laws concerning should be introduced by the authorities．With our joint efforts，our society will surely become good．And I sincerely hope such cases won't happen any more．
详解：
71．去掉it，考查定语从句，这是as引导的非限制性定语从句，as在从句中作主语，不能再加it．
72．walked改为walking，考查分词，此处应该用过去进行时态，was walking．
73．a改为the，考查冠词，特指附近的医院．
74．do前加to，考查不定式，have the right to do sth．"有权利做某事"
75．Besides改为However，考查副词，besides‘此外，而且，除…之外'，however"然而．"根据句意"我们有权利做我们想做事情，然而，侵犯别人的权利也不能接受的"，故用however．
76．that改为which，考查定语从句，此处为which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子内容，在非限制性定语从句中，不用that．
77．continue改为continues，考查主谓一致，此句主语 为this behavior所以用单数谓语．
78．punish改为punishment，考查名词，此处punishment作deserve的宾语，应该用名词形式．
79．improve改为improving，考查动名词，在短语devote…to中，to是介词，后跟名词、动名词．
80．concerning改为concerned，考查分词，conerning是介词"关于"，concerned是形容词"有关的"，常作后置定语．
点评 短文改错口诀：
动词形，名词数；注意形和副；非谓动词细辨别；习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析；逻辑错误须关注．
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