Question

【题目】书面表达

近些年来，随着人们生活水平的日益改善，饲养宠物的人们的数量与日俱增。饲养宠物给人们带来快乐的同时，也随之带来了一些问题。主要有：（一）、宠物发出的噪音非常扰民；（二）、动物的粪便会污染环境；（三）、当主人带着宠物去公共场所时，有些宠物会吓着孩子甚至咬人；（四）、 某些宠物会传播疾病，已经引起了人们的广泛关注。

假如你是李华，请你就上面提到的人们饲养宠物带了的问题给报社编辑写一封信，寻求帮助， 并期待媒体能够就解决该问题做一些事情。

注意：

1. 字数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasons.

First of all, as it is known to people, pets make much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文（应用文），根据提示信息可知李华想就宠物引起的社会问题，寻求媒体的帮助，希望能够解决问题。为此需要给编辑部写一封信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文主题鲜明，结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构给文章填色不少。比如 as it is known to people, pets make much noise that troubles residents a lot..as引导的非限制性定语从句，指代后面整句话；it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable.It is widely accepted that…普遍认为…It是形式主语，真正的主语是that从句，且此处Which引导非限制性定语从句，指代先行词animal waste；Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.现在分词做状语。

文章还使用了大量短语 occupy one’s time占用某人的时间，take sth seriously认真对待某事，attract one’s attention引起某人的注意，take sth into consideration把某事考虑进去等。连接词 first of all, what’s more等的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。