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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Miss Jones was math teacher. Her home not far from her school, but she always walked there in the morning. All the pupils in the school was very young. In a cold and windy morning, Miss Jones walked to the school, and the cold wind goes into her eyes. and big tear began to run out . she reached school. opened the door and going into the classroom. It was nice and warm here and Miss Jones was happily, but then a small boy looked at her for a few seconds, to put his arms around her and said kind. "Don't cry, Miss Jones .School isn't very bad."

1.在math teacher.前加不定冠词a

2.把but改成and。

3.把was改成were。

4.把In 改成On。

5.把In 改成goes改成went。

6.把tear改成tears.

7.把going改成went。

8.把happily改成happy。

9.把to put前的to去掉。

10.把kind.改成kindly。

【解析】

1.1】teacher是单数,此处表示一个数学老师,故在math teacher.前加不定冠词a。

2.2】前后是并列关系,表示递进。句意:她的家里她的学校不远,她总是在上午步行去那里。所以把but改成and。

3.3】前面的主语All the pupils是复数形式,所以把was改成were。

4.4】在某一天的上午用介词on,句意:在一个冷的有风的上午。所以把In 改成On。

5.5】根据句意句子的时态用一般过去时态,walked和goes是并列关系,所以把In 改成goes改成went。

6.6】tear眼泪,通常以复数形式出现,所以把tear改成tears.

7.7】此处是三个并列的表示过去的动作,reached、opened和going是并列关系,所以把going改成went。

8.8】be动词后面用形容词作表语,happily是副词,所以把happily改成happy。

9.9】此处是三个并列的表示过去的动作,looked、to put和said是并列关系,put的过去式是put,所以把to put前的to去掉。

10.10】副词修饰动词,kind.是形容词,所以把kind.改成kindly。

考点:考查短文改错。

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