Question

5．下面短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are many cars in our town．For a result，there are lots of traffic jams，and the air which we will breathe is terrible．Our town is very old but all the streets are quite narrow，so there is no room for bus lanes，which mean that buses always get stuck in the traffic jams，too．However，lots of accidents with cyclists often happen because of crowded street．But I think there is a simple solution of these problems．The government should close city center to all traffic except buses and bikes，and build very larger car parks outside the town．Car drivers can take a bus into the city center and arrive at work or the shops relaxing and in a good mood．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者所在的镇有许多小车．由于街道狭窄，总是产生交通堵塞，引发许多事故．作者建议在镇外建更大的停车场以缓解交通压力．

解答 There are many cars in our town．For a result，there are lots of traffic jams，and the air which we will breathe is terrible．Our town is very old but all the streets are quite narrow，so there is no room for bus lanes，which mean that buses always get stuck in the traffic jams，too．However，lots of accidents with cyclists often happen because of crowded street．But I think there is a simple solution of these problems．The government should close∧city center to all traffic except buses and bikes，and build very larger car parks outside the town．Car drivers can take a bus into the city center and arrive at work or the shops relaxing and in a good mood．
详解：
1．For改为As 考查介词．as a result意为"结果，因此"，是固定搭配．
2．去掉will 考查动词时态．此处表示一般事实，要用一般现在时态．
3．but改为and 考查连词．前后两个单句之间是顺承关系，而非转折关系，用连词and．
4．mean改为means 考查主谓一致．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在定语从句中，谓语动词与先行词在数上保持一致，句子作主语时，谓语动词用单数形式．
5．However改为Besides 考查副词．根据语境，此处表示递进关系，用副词besides，而however表示转折关系．
6．street改为streets 考查名词复数．street是可数名词，表示不止一条街道，用复数形式．
7．of改为to 考查介词．solution to意为"针对…的解决方案"，是固定搭配．
8．city center前加the 考查冠词．city center表示特指，要加定冠词the．
9．larger改为large 考查形容词．此处没有比较对象，要用形容词原级．
10．relaxing改为relaxed 考查过去分词． drivers与relax之间是动宾关系，用过去分词作状语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．