Question

13．你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问（English Study Advisor），请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事．主要内容包括：
（1）母语是英语，汉语流利者优先；
（2）解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动；
（3）每周 工作四小时，报酬面议；
（4）联系人：李华（Tel.13011223344）
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
English Study Advisor Wanted
                   ．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问（English Study Advisor），请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事．主要内容包括：（1）母语是英语，汉语流利者优先；（2）解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动；（3）每周 工作四小时，报酬面议；（4）联系人：李华（Tel.13011223344）．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，高分句型：
The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．句中使用动词不定式；
The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．并列的动名词短语作宾语；
Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．被动语态在句中出现；
If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．经典使用条件句；
Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．巧妙使用一般将来时态的被动语态．

解答 English Study Advisor Wanted
       The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．（高分句型一）
       The applicant should be a native speaker of English．Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．（高分句型二）
       If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．（高分句型三）Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．