Question

6．目前，许多人认为上大学是通向美好未来的唯一出路．请以College and Success in Life 为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法．
要求：1．引出观点；
2．联系实际进行客观分析论证；
3．得出结论．
College and Success in Life
Nowadays，a lot of people believe going to college is the only way to a brighter future．             ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们以College and Success in Life 为题写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：引出观点，许多人认为上大学是通向美好未来的唯一出路；联系实际进行客观分析论证；得出结论；我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为引出观点，许多人认为上大学是通向美好未来的唯一出路．第二部分为联系实际进行客观分析论证．第三部分为得出结论．
重点短语与句型：
as for  至于，关于…
as a famous saying goes正如名谚语所说
All roads lead to Rome条条大路通罗马
 In conclusion最后
高分句型一：Nowadays，a lot of people believe going to college is the only way to a brighter future．此句宾语从句中用了动名词going to college 作主语
高分句型二：Undoubtedly，college education has a positive effect on your professional development if you want to have a career such as law，engineering，chemistry or medicine，especially in a society full of competition．此句用了if 引导的条件状语从句

解答 College and Success in Life
  Nowadays，a lot of people believe going to college is the only way to a brighter future．（高分句型一）But as for me，a college education is important but not a must in life，just as a famous saying goes"All roads lead to Rome．"（引出观点，许多人认为上大学是通向美好未来的唯一出路）
  Undoubtedly，college education has a positive effect on your professional development if you want to have a career such as law，engineering，chemistry or medicine，especially in a society full of competition．（高分句型二）Although it can help you succeed in some way，college education is not essential to whether you are successful or not in life．For instance，you can even become a brilliant movie star like JakieChan，or a successful businessman like Bill Gates in a particularfield without higher education．（ 联系实际进行客观分析论证） 
  In conclusion，college education may be a good preparation but not the only means to your future  success．（得出结论）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．