Question

1．假如你是中学生李平．最近你校规定：学生在校期间，禁止到校外就餐．现在，请你就此事给校报英文版编辑写一封信，内容包括：
1．学校制定此规定的理由；
2．同学们对此规定的反应及理由；
3．你的看法．
注意：1．词数120左右；信的开头和结束语已写好，不计入总次数；
      2．文中不得透露你和所在学校的真实名字；
      3．参考词汇：食堂 canteen[C]
Dear editor，
Dear editor，
I'm writing to talk about our school's new rule that all students are forbidden to eat out during school days．（说明原因）
The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．（高分句型一） However，some students are against the rule for two reasons．First，they dislike the food in the canteen because of its poor quality．In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．（高分句型二）（阐述理由）
Personally，to make more students have meal inside the campus，the school should make the food taste nicer and offer them a larger variety of food，too．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Pin
Best wishes．
                                                             Yours，
                                                                     Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．
高分句型二：
In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．
句型一 ①if students have meals in the canteen 该句使用了if引导的条件状语从句
            ②because the food there is cheaper．该句是一个由because 引导的原因状语从句
            ③for one thing…for anther…固定短语 一方面…另一方面
句型二 ①the school seems to try to make more money 该句谓语部分使用了系动词seem的用法：seem to do sth
           ②if all students are forced to have every meal…该句为if引导的条件状语从句

解答 Dear editor，
   I'm writing to talk about our school's new rule that all students are forbidden to eat out during school days．（说明原因）
   The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．（高分句型一）  However，some students are against the rule for two reasons．First，they dislike the food in the canteen because of its poor quality．In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．（高分句型二）（阐述理由）
   Personally，to make more students have meal inside the campus，the school should make the food taste nicer and offer them a larger variety of food，too．
   Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Pin

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，对于题干提出的观点，要求考生给予相应的描述，写作时应注意将要求与自身实际相结合，表达出自身对此观点的态度．语言应尽量做到表述准确，用词简洁明了．