Question

7．友善是人们日常生活中的重要部分．请以"友善"为话题写一篇英语短文．
内容要求：
1．你对友善的理解；
2．在日常生活中如何善待他人；
3．恰当的结尾．
注意：
①无须写标题，文中不能出现考生的具体信息；
②词数不少于120词
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As  we all know，kindness is a very important part of living．众所周知，友善是我们生活中的非常重要的一部分．
分句型二：
Besides，it is important for us to commucicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．
除此以外，和彼此交流以及分享快乐与悲伤是非常重要的．
句型一 As  we all know，…该句是一个由as作引导词，代替后面整个句子的非限制性定语从句
句型二 it is important for us to commucicate with each…该句使用了it作形式主语而将真正的主语不定式位于句尾的固定句型：It's+adj+for sb+to do sth

解答 As  we all know，kindness is a very important part of living．（高分句型一）Kindness is not something that can necessarily be paid back．It doesn't take much to be kind．A smile，a gentle look，a gentle touch on the arm，and a hug will let people know that you care about them．（说明原因）
   Stuents should learn how to be kind to others．But in what ways？First of all，we should respect others．Everybody has their own way to do things，so we should understand each other．Besides，it is important for us to commucicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．（高分句型二）What's more，we should offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．（提出要求） Then we will feel very happy．
   So why don't you try a random act of kindness？I think you'll like how you feel，and you will like the results．

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