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9．假如你叫李华，是铜陵的一名中学生．最近，当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果引起人们的广泛争议．请你根据人们不同的观点，给当地报社写一封信，发表自己的观点．

赞成观点	反对观点
1．能够解决交通问题，方便人民生活； 2．有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平； 3．有助于提高铜陵作为现代化旅游城市的形象．	1．会造成环境污染； 2．会产生噪音，打扰居民平静的生活； 3．时常造成交通堵塞．
你的观点…

注意：1．信的开头已给出，但不计人总词数．
2．不要逐句翻译，可适当增加内容使行文连贯．
3．词数120左右．    
参考词汇：快速公交系统 BRT
高架桥 overpass
Dear Edtor，
I'm writing to you about the road construction which is taking place in our city．
                                                       
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息最近，当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果引起人们的广泛争议．请你根据人们不同的观点，给当地报社写一封信，发表自己的观点，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从赞成观点和反对观点两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take place举行，发生；carry out 执行，实施；besides另外；as well as也，和；now and then不时地；Personally就个人而言；however然而；do good to对…有益；
Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads and build BRT，which has aroused a heated discussion．（高分句型一）
Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable； besides，it helps promote the economy and improve people's living environment as well as the image of Tongling as a modern tourist city．（高分句型二）
However，I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and bring  convenience to the residence in the future．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm writing to you about the construction project which is taking place in our city．Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads and build BRT，which has aroused a heated discussion．（高分句型一）
      Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable； besides，it helps promote the economy and improve people's living environment as well as the image of Tongling as a modern tourist city．（高分句型二）
      But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution．And traffic jams appear now and then．Even worse，the noise produced by the work will disturb people's peaceful life．
      Personally，the overpasses in the street may somewhat damage the appearance of our city．However，I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and bring  convenience to the residence in the future．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．