Question

【题目】有一个美国代表团想了解你们的英语老师Mr. Moon，请根据下列提要，写一篇以＂My Teacher Mr. Moon”文。

[写作内容]

1.出生于法国，华籍美国人，40岁，活泼，具有幽默感。

2.与其他教师相比，他更注重教学方法，总想尽各种方法让他的课生动有趣。

3.鼓励学生思考，培养学生自学能力。

4.帮助学生学会了分析和解决问题。

5.博学，深受学生爱戴。

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】My Teacher Mr. Moon

Born in France and aged 40, Mr. Moon, an American Chinese, is a lovely teacher with a sense of humor. Compared with other teachers, Mr. Moon pays more attention to his ways of teaching, trying various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In class he always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own. With his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and solve problems. He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇对人物描写的文章，要点已给出，首先把每个要点翻译出来，然后连词成句，把句子组成文章，使用合适的连词或承接词使句子之间具有连贯性，使文章读起来很丰满。注意句子形式要多样，用词要准确。注意只能用5个句子，所以尽量使用长句，或者非谓语结构，短语等等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言流畅，简洁，要点全面。在文章中作者使用了介词短语with one’s help，非谓语短语born in France and aged 40、trying various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.和compared with 等。还使用了定语从句He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much。