Question

第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
李华是一名高一年级的中学生，阅读她的这篇日记，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
August 6, 2010                           Sunny
Half of my summer vocation has passed. It's supposed to be the time for me, a senior- one student, to relax, read novels, chat with friends and, anyway, not to worry about getting up at 7 am for class.
Even before the vocation, I had been arranged to attend different "enrichment" classes to improve my main subjects. My mum did ask for my opinion whether I would like to go to such classes. But could I refuse? My negative reply would cause a long persuasion, which I would not face.
Besides, the teachers made summer homework lists as we were sent off for vocation. The reason sounds persuasive -- to keep us studying during the long break so we wouldn't forget our lessons.
I found that the joy of my summer vocation had been stolen. But do I blame my mum or my teachers? Of course not. Though I don't like listening to my mum's lessons about society competition, I still understand that I should do well in study. What bothers me is that I don't feel like sitting in the classroom focusing my mind on the teachers' lectures. My mind is staying outdoors, tasting the freedom of the blue skies, the power of sunshine and the comfort of gentle wind....... not only scores or certificates.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2.然后以约120个词就“中学生在暑假参加学习班”的现象发表看法，并包括如下要点：
1)你认为中学生在暑假参加强化学习班（enrichment classes）是否有好处？
2)以你自己或身边的实例说明你的观点；
3)对中学生的家长们提出建议。
【写作要求】
可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

About Enrichment Classes
The student complained in her diary that, instead of having fun in the summer vacation, she was occupied by enrichment classes and piles of homework, which were arranged by the parent and the teachers. Though she followed the arrangement, she seemed to be fed up.
In my opinion, it's not a good idea to attend enrichment classes during the summer vacation. Summer vacation is supposed to be a time for students to have a break between terms of hard work. Without a thorough relax, how can we refresh ourselves? Besides, surfing the internet, visiting museums or reading novels are also ways of learning, which are more interesting to us.
My own experience is a good example. At the beginning of this summer vacation, I, together with some of my friends, designed a trip to Expo 2010 in Shanghai. We booked the airline tickets and the hotel on the internet, which saved us a lot of money. It's really a great fun when the whole world seemed to be in front of you, and in the pavilions the various experiences building cities impressed us a lot. I learned more about the world, the culture and the environment, which is not sufficient or that vivid in our textbooks.
I don't think parents should arrange the vacation for the children themselves. Instead, parents should care more about the children's feeling, try to understand and believe in them. Above all, parents have to understand not only scores guarantee children's future.

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