Question

【题目】假如你叫李华。你的美国笔友Simon发来电子邮件，告诉你他和他的家人七月来北京体验中国传统文化，请为他安排北京一日游活动。请回复邮件，告诉他你的活动安排并解释安排的理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Simon,

Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July, I’m writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing, which I hope will be to your liking.

First, it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style. Second, you can’t afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon, where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals. In the evening, it can’t be better to take a walk in the Tiananmen Square because it is the largest square in the world and attracts millions of tourists every year.

I hope you’ll enjoy an unforgettable experience in Beijing. Look forward to your coming.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文为开放性作文。一般来说开放性作文，题干会给出一个话题，然后围绕这个话题进行写作。本文的话题是给你的美国笔友Simon和他的家人安排北京一日游活动。看完要求之后确定文章的框架结构，三段式。第一段写你很开心他们来北京，并且会带他们参观北京；第二段详细介绍安排并且解释安排的理由，这是本文的主体部分；最后一段再次表达你的热情并且期待他们的到来。写作时要根据表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。同时，根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。形式主语的使用以及定语从句的使用：it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history.非限制性定语从句的使用：where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.原因状语从句的使用：it can’t be better to take a walk in the Tiananmen Square because it is the largest square in the world。