题目内容
5.某公司为满足社会需求,推出了家用机器人帮助上班一族料理家务,假设你是该公司的一名员工,将在新闻发布会上向大家介绍这一新型产品,机器人的主要功能1:做家务,在特定的时间做饭,做饭时间能够调整.
2:陪老人聊天,下棋,做运动等.
3:及时处理突发事件(emergency紧急状况)例如拨打急救电话(ambulance call) 等词数120左右,内容可适当发挥.
Hello,everyone!Now I'd like to introduce the robot to you. .
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,根据提示信息针对家用机器人帮忙料理家务这一话题开展讨论,大家发表了不同的看法,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:做家务,在特定的时间做饭,做饭时间能够调整.陪老人聊天,下棋,做运动等.及时处理突发事件(emergency紧急状况)例如拨打急救电话(ambulance call)几个方面来讨论该话题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be designed for 专为…而设计;do housework 做家务;besides 另外;play chess 下象棋;in case of 以防,万一;without delay毫不耽搁
It is designed for working people and can offer much convenience in daily life.(高分句型一)
While you are away,it can become good friends for old people.(高分句型二)
The most surprising,I think,is that in case of emergency,the robot can immediately dial the ambulance call and the first help can be received without delay.(高分句型三)
解答 Hello,everyone!Now I'd like to introduce the robot to you.It is designed for working people and can offer much convenience in daily life.(高分句型一)
One of the advantages is that it can do housework.Does it sound unimaginable?It can cook dinner at setting-up time.Of course,the time can be changed as you like.Besides,the new robot can"speak".While you are away,it can become good friends for old people.(高分句型二) For example,if they feel lonely,he can have a chat,play chess and even do exercise with them actively.This advantage can relieve your worrying about leaving them alone.
The most surprising,I think,is that in case of emergency,the robot can immediately dial the ambulance call and the first help can be received without delay.(高分句型三)
Such is the new robot,a super advanced,useful and greatly helpful machine.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.