题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国同学Jeff写一封电子邮件,告知本周六学校将为留学生举办晚会。邮件的内容包括:
1.晚会的时间和地点;2. 晚会的内容;3. 邀请Jeff参加。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jeff,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jeff,
I’m glad to tell you that our school will throw a party for the international students. The party will be held in the concert hall from 7:30 pm to 9:00 pm this Saturday. There’ll be Chinese comedies, magic acts, and some Chinese folk songs and dances. I’m sure you can get to know more about Chinese customs and culture there. Besides, there will be a free conversation session, which would be a good chance for you to meet people from around the world in an enjoyable environment.
I hope you can come and have a good time.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文要求给美国同学Jeff写一份e-mail。要点如下:1.晚会的时间和地点;2. 晚会的内容;3. 邀请Jeff参加。应该用一般将来时。注意增加细节,使衔接合理,还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短搭配。
【亮点说明】本文内容要点的完整性、上下文连贯、词汇和句式的多样。结构明确,思路清晰。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如throw a party,get to know 和which引导的非限制性定语从句等。Besides并注意了句子的变化和衔接如Besides的应用。