题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华，目前在英国某中学做交换生。学校公告栏上一则出售二手笔记本电脑的广告引起了你的兴趣。
FOR SALE
Lenovo Yoga 300 laptop in excellent condition
4GB RAM and 64 GB hard drive
Price:155
Contact Heck at jheck@aef.com
请用英语写一封电子邮件，咨询有关电脑的详情。内容主要包括：
表明写作意图；
询问相关信息：是否有原始购机发票（invoice),是否维修过，如何付款。
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Heck,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Heck,
I am writing for more information about the laptop advertised on the school bulletin board. I would appreciate it if you could be kind enough to answer the following question. First of all, do you still have the original invoice for the laptop? Secondly, I would like to know whether the laptop has any problems. Have you ever had it repaired? Lastly, where and how can we conclude a deal if both of us agree to one? By the way, would it be possible to give me a 10% discount considering the storage of the laptop is rather small.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是应用文，要求询问对学校公告栏上贴出的出售的二手笔记本电脑进行咨询，内容要求包括：第一部分表明自己的写作意图；第二部分询问相关信息：是否有原始购机发票（invoice),是否维修过，如何付款。最后表达愿望，希望对方尽快回复。
写作时要按照咨询信结构，注意写全要点，条理清楚。还要尽量使用高级词汇和句型来增加亮点。
【亮点说明】本文要点全面，使用了高级词汇和高级句型。如：First of all, Secondly, Lastly, By the way的使用使文章条理清楚，衔接自然；使用了过去分词advertised on the school bulletin board. I would appreciate it if…句型，宾语从句whether the laptop has any problems.等为文章增色添彩。
