题目内容
15.第二节 书面表达假如你是李华,你校全体师生近期将举行一次远足活动,请你给外教Tim写一封邮件邀请他一起参加.内容要点如下表:
出发 | 目的地 | 活动安排 |
本周日上午8点;校门口 | 汉阳陵博物馆Hanyangling Museum(距离你校约10公里) | 1.参观景区 2.合影留念 3.… |
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Tim,
I am writing to invite you to join a hiking to Hanyangling Museum,which lies about 10 kilometers away from our school.(高分句型一)The hikers consist of almost all the school staff and students.The following are the details.
First,we'll start off at 8:00 a.m.this Sunday from our school gate,and the whole journey will take one or two hours.Then,we're to visit the museum at about ten o'clock and next,enjoy the beautiful scenery outdoors,which needs about one and a half hours.After that,having some photos taken and a picnic together is what to end our activities.(高分句型二)
We would feel much honored if you could make it.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息全体师生近期将举行一次远足活动,请给外教Tim写一封邮件邀请他一起参加,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:出发具体时间、目的地及活动安排 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:consist of由…组成;非限制性定语从句的使用:I am writing to invite you to join a hiking to Hanyangling Museum,which lies about 10 kilometers away from our school.和we're to visit the museum at about ten o'clock and next,enjoy the beautiful scenery outdoors,which needs about one and a half hours;动名词作主语及表语从句:having some photos taken and a picnic together is what to end our activities.
解答 Dear Tim,
I am writing to invite you to join a hiking to Hanyangling Museum,which lies about 10 kilometers away from our school.(高分句型一)The hikers consist of almost all the school staff and students.The following are the details.
First,we'll start off at 8:00 a.m.this Sunday from our school gate,and the whole journey will take one or two hours.Then,we're to visit the museum at about ten o'clock and next,enjoy the beautiful scenery outdoors,which needs about one and a half hours.After that,having some photos taken and a picnic together is what to end our activities.(高分句型二)
We would feel much honored if you could make it.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
