假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jane，
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party．I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents．They are very older and not in a good health recently．However，my mother made a telephone call to them last week，promised to visit them with me this Saturday．My mother said we will stay at my grandparents'the whole weekend．So I'm real sorry I can't take part your party．Here I wish you a lot of funs on your birthday．
Yours，
Lisa．

分析这是一封书信．谢谢你邀请我参加你的生日聚会，我想来但我要去看望我老家的祖父母，他们身体不太好．母亲说我们要在祖父母家过周末．祝你生日快乐．

解答 Dear Jane，
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party．I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents．They are very older and not in a good health recently．However，my mother made a telephone call to them last week，promised to visit them with me this Saturday．My mother said we will stay at my grandparents'the whole weekend．So I'm real sorry I can't take part∧your party．Here I wish you a lot of funs on your birthday．
Yours，
Lisa．
1．invite改为inviting；动名词错误．句中invite作介词for的宾语，要用动名词形式．
2．and改为but；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，不是并列．
3．older改为old；比较级错误．句意表达的是一般事实，没有比较的含义．
4．a去掉；冠词错误．in good health身体健康，常用短语．
5．However改为Therefore；副词错误．句意表达的是递进，不是转折．
6．promised改为promising；分词错误．句中promise作伴随状语，promise与主语my mother构成主谓关系，要用表示主动的现在分词．
7．will改为would；时态错误．句中主语是一般过去时态，宾语从句时态要保持一致，也要用过去时态．
8．real改为really；副词错误．句中real修饰动词stay，要用副词．
9．加in；短语搭配错误．take part in参加．
10．funs改为fun；名词错误．句中fun是抽象名词，不用复数．