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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A woman was taken to the hospital．While having an operation，she had a nearly
death experience．Seeing God，she asked how this was it．God said，"No，you had another
40years．"On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery．She had someone
change her hair color，thinking since she had so many time to live，she'd better make full
use from it．Finally she got out of the hospital．While crossing the street，she killed by an
ambulance speeded by．Arriving in the front of God，she demanded，"They said I had
another 40years!"God replied，"But I didn't recognize you．"

分析 一位女士被送到医院做手术，她经历了一次濒临死亡的体验．上帝告诉她，她还可以再活四十年．康复后她决定整形，染了头发．当她过马路时，被一辆救护车撞死了．来到上帝面前，她说道：你不是说我还可以活四十年吗？上帝回答道：我没认出你啊！

解答 A woman was taken to the hospital．While having an operation，she had a nearly
                                                                                                              near
death experience．Seeing God，she asked how this was it．God said，"No，you had
                                                           if/whether                                             have
another 40 years．"On recovery the womendecided to have a plastic surgery．She had
                                                       woman
someone change her hair color，thinking since she had so many time to live，she'd
                                                                                    much
better make full use fromit．Finally she got out of the hospital．While crossing the
                               of
street，she∧killed by an ambulance speeded by．Arriving in the front of God，
               加was                             speeding                        去掉
she demanded，"They said I had another 40 years!"God replied，"But I didn't
                           You
recognize you．"
1．nearly改为near．短语搭配，a near death experience濒临死亡的体验．
2．how改为if/whether．题干是宾语从句，句意表达是否，不是表示程度．
3．had改为have．直接引语中表示说话当时的情况，要用一般现在时态．
4．women改为woman．文章讲述的是一位女士，要用单数．
5．many改为much．题干修饰的是时间time，不可数名词，要用much来修饰．
6．from改为of．短语搭配，make full use of充分利用．
7．加was．句意表达的是被动，要加be动词．
8．speeded改为speeding．题干中speed是作ambulance的后置定语，表达主动关系，要用现在分词．
9．the去掉．in front of是外部的前面，in the front of是内部的前面．
10．they改为you．逻辑错误，句意是用来指代上帝，应该是you．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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