Question

短文改错[2015 •陕西渭南教学质检]

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

One day I happens to find a chatting room on my QQ,there people were chatting in English.  I tried chat with some of them. To my surprised,I found the oral English,of some junior students was better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many use?ful words and expressions. With time go by,I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.

Answer 1

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