Question

19．假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知．
1．考试日期与科目；
2．考试准备情况；
3．考试吋的状态；
4．对试题的感受；
5．可能的考试结果．
注意：
1、词数120左右；
2、开头语和结尾语已为你写好；
3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4、文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称．
参考词汇：高考college entrance examination
Dear  Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Well，I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．
Over the past ten months，we have been busy in preparing for this examination．Besides listening to teachers carefully in class，we often work deep into night．Therefore，I believe I can succeed．
At first，I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math，I came to realize，were very easy and English is my favorite subject，you know．So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Xia．

Best  wishes!
Yours，
Li  Xia．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给美国笔友写一封信，告知他你参加高考的情况．
写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
写作要点：1．考试日期与科目；2．考试准备情况；3．考试时的状态；4．对试题的感受；5．可能的考试结果．
重要短语：reform sth（代表），be replaced by（被代替），share sth with sb（与某人分享某物），needless to say （更不用说），according to （根据），have positive effects on（对…有影响），be of great significance（非常有意义），loss of （损失），keep fit（保持健康），contributes to（促成），broaden one's horizons（拓宽某人的视野），in turn （反过来又），be beneficial to （对…有益）．
【高分句型一】
1．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．
此处是"介词短语+关系代词"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th"，关系代词"which"指代主句中的"the exam"．
【高分句型二】
2．So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"a good mark"，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语．

解答 Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Well，I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．【高分句型一】（考试日期与科目）
Over the past ten months，we have been busy in preparing for this examination．Besides listening to teachers carefully in class，we often work deep into night．（考试准备情况）Therefore，I believe I can succeed．（可能的考试结果）
At first，I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math，I came to realize，were very easy and English is my favorite subject，you know．（考试吋的状态及对试题的感受） So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．【高分句型二】（可能的考试结果）
Best wishes!
Yours，
 Li Xia

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．