题目内容
【题目】假期即将到来,同学们在口语课上讨论假期计划,提出了不同的看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论内容的短文,并谈谈你的假期打算。
优点 | 缺点 | |
待在家中 | 舒适,能好好休息,和亲人、同学相聚 | 失去开阔眼界的机会 |
外出旅游 | 有机会和不同的人交流,丰富自己的经验 | 花费多,旅途不便 |
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.参考词汇 开阔 broaden 眼界 horizon
【答案】
The holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. After a tiring term, they believe it a comfortable way to relax themselves. Besides, it’s good and convenient for them to get together with friends and family members during the holiday. However, they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world. Others prefer to go out for travelling. They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well.
In my opinion, it would be better to stay at home, for I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in favor of支持;prefer to喜欢;In my opinion在我看来;The holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home这个句子运用到特殊疑问词+不定式做宾语的形式;They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons这个句子meeting是动名词做主语;In my opinion, it would be better to stay at home, for I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework.这个句子中whatever引导名词性从句;