题目内容

【题目】你校最近举办了一次募捐活动,请根据以下内容用英语写一篇报道。

【写作内容】

基本情况:

1)组织者:校团委和义工协会 (The School League Committee & Volunteer Association)

2)时间:2014年11月28日下午3点至5点;

3)地点:学校一楼中央大厅( the Central Hall);

4)捐助者:学校全体学生;

5)募捐物品:衣物、书本、文具等。

募捐目的:

1)通过此次活动培养学生的爱心;

2)帮助四川大凉山区家庭贫困的学生继续学业。

募捐情况:

1)学生踊跃参加,捐出衣物、书籍、作业本、文具等一万多件(item),高三(22)班捐助最多。有一位不愿透露姓名的高三学生花了4000元零花钱购买药品和文具捐到现场。

2)募捐所得已由义工协会成员送往捐助总站(the Donation Station)。

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

【答案】

The School League Committee & Volunteer Association organized a donation activity in the Central Hall of the first floor of our school from 3 pm to 5 pm on November 28th, 2014. The purpose of the activity was to cultivate the students’ sense of love and help the poverty-stricken students from mountainous areas of Daliang Sichuan Province to continue their study. All of the students in our school took an active part in the activity, donating more than 10000 items of clothes, books, stationery and so on with Class 22, Senior 3 donating the most. An unnamed Senior 3 student spent 4000 yuan of his pocket money on medicine and stationery and donated them to the scene of the donation. All of these items have been delivered to the Donation Station by the members of the Volunteer Association.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,根据提示信息写一次募捐的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般过去时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如donating more than 10000 items of clothes,是非谓语短语作伴随状语。此外,文章还使用了大量短语如cultivate the students’ sense of love、donated to等。这些短语以及句式为文章增加了色彩。

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