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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I asked Jack, a friend of mine, what has happened to him that night. He said that he had just got into bed on about half past eleven when the floor began to shake under him. The bed was also started shaking. He jumped out of his bed rapid and wanted to turn the light on. But the floor was shaking such violently that he could hardly reach the lamp. It seemed to take him long time to get to it and turned it on. Then he went to look out of the window. He saw that the houses on the other side of the street was also shaking. Then he knew that was happening — an earthquake! He quickly put on his clothes and ran out into the street to waiting until it was safe to go back inside.

Answer 1

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【解析】文章讲述了朋友经历地震时的所见所感。

1.第一处：has →had. 考查动词时态。时间状语是that night，且由asked可知此处该用过去完成时，故将has改为had.

2.第二处：on →at. 考查介词。具体时间点前面介词表示＂在＂用at，此处指在11点半，故on →at.

3.第三处：bed后的was去掉。考查语态。start一般不能用被动，此处用主动，故bed后的was去掉。

4.第四处：rapid →rapidly. 考查副词。此处修饰动词jumped用副词，故rapid →rapidly.

5.第五处：such →so.考查副词。表示“如此…以至于”，此处修饰副词violently用so,such修饰名词，故such →so.

6.第六处：long前加a. 考查冠词。此处是固定结构a long time，表示很长一段时间，故long前加a.

7.第七处：turned →turn. 考查动词形式。此处是不定式后的并列结构，和get并列，用动词原形。故turned →turn.

8.第八处：was →were.考查主谓一致。句中主语是houses为复数，谓语与之一致也用复数，故was →were.

9.第九处：that →what.考查代词。此处引导宾语从句，在从句充当主语，表示＂什么事情＂，用what。故that →what.

10.第十处：waiting →wait.考查动词形式。 to在此是不定式中的to，表目的，动词用原形，故waiting改为wait.