Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你和你的同学组织了一场讨论。讨论的主题是：广告的利和弊。请你根据下面提供的信息，介绍你们讨论的结果。

广告之利	广告之弊	你的观点
1. 提供商品、服务、文化、就业等信息； 2. 为顾客节约购物时间； 3. 为厂家或服务提供商找市场。	1. 浪费人们的时间，如电视广告； 2. 有的广告带有欺骗性，误导消费者； 3. 巨额的广告开支转嫁到了消费者身上。	……

注意：词数150词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently our class have held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Recently our class have held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.

Daily life needs advertisements because they can offer information on goods, services, culture, employment, and so on. Besides, with advertisements, customers can save a lot of time in shopping. Last but not least, advertisements also help factories or service providers find their market. In a word, advertisements have many advantages.

However, we also find advertisements a waste of time when we don’t need them, for example, when watching TV proograms. To make things worse, some advertisements are misleading and cheating. Furthermore, huge advertising expenses are shared by customers, which seems to be unfair.

In my opinion, ads have both the good side and the opposite side. If we just take them as a reference, it will be good. But if we depend on them to buy things, we may suffer great losses in the end.

【解析】试题分析：本文讲述的是，你和你的同学组织了一场讨论，讨论的主题是：广告的利和弊。根据所提供的信息，介绍讨论的结果，要求写出广告的利与弊，以及本人的观点。写作时根据所给提纲，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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