题目内容
【题目】请你根据所给背景材料、建议以及要求写一篇英文短文。
背景材料
编者按:本期刊出Henry的来信,欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题提出建议并给出理由。
Dear editor,
The summer holidays come to an end and a new school year begins. Although school is all about getting knowledge and learning is a part of our life, it's not only exciting but also exhausting, boring and stressful. I am worried about the coming duties.
建议1.心态乐观 2.课后活动3.健康饮食。
要求l、词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头语和结尾语已为你写好
Dear Henry,
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Yours ,
Mike
【答案】Dear Henry,
I'm glad to share my solutions to your problem. First, be optimistic. An optimistic way of thinking always helps us even in the most difficult life situations and this one is no exception. There's nothing in school that can make you scared. Cheer yourself up, and you'll feel no stress for good. Then, stretch yourself after class. Exercise not only builds up our body, but also helps improve our mood, which helps you forget about stress and makes you smile instead. Finally, eat healthily. In this way, you can keep energetic and fit. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away. "Therefore, make sure you add enough fruit, vegetables, nuts, and other healthy foods to your meals.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文写作。需要注意以下要点。
(1) 仔细审题。明确写作要求,抓住写作要点。
(2) 拟写草稿。在审题的基础上,拟写草稿,注意对关键要点覆盖全面的同时还要注意内容的丰富。
(3) 运用高级词汇和句子格式。在写作过程中要运用一些高级词汇,还要注意运用一些从句,使得句子不再单一。
【范文亮点】
there be句型的应用。There's nothing in school that can make you scared.
特殊句型:祈使句+连词+sb.will do。Cheer yourself up, and you'll feel no stress for good.
定语从句。Exercise not only builds up our body, but also helps improve our mood, which helps you forget about stress and makes you smile instead.
定语从句。As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
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