题目内容
10.下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
A century before,a bird called the passenger pigeon lived in North America.There were so many passenger pigeons when people often saw thousands,even millions of birds flying overhead.Therefore,there is not a single one left today.What happened?How did all passenger pigeons disappear from the earth entire?
The passenger pigeons become extinct for two reason.First,the forests that it lived was cut down to make way with farms and cities.Second,many pigeons were shot and eaten because they were too good to eat.At that time,there were no hunting laws protect endangered species as they are now.
分析 本文主要讲述候鸽灭绝的两个原因:一、它们的栖息地消失了;二、它们好吃被猎杀了.
解答 A century before,a bird called the passenger pigeon lived in North America.There were so many passenger pigeons when people often saw thousands,even millions of birds flying overhead.Therefore,there is not a single one left today.What happened?How did all passenger pigeons disappear from the earth entire?
The passenger pigeons become extinct for two reason.First,the forests that it lived was cut down to make way with farms and cities.Second,many pigeons were shot and eaten because they were too good to eat.At that time,there were no hunting laws∧protect endangered species as they are now.
详解:
1.before改为ago 考查副词.before 表示"从过去某时起若干时间以前",常与过去完成式连用.而before既可作副词又可作介词和连词.ago 表示"从现在起若干时间以前",常与动词一般过去式连用.而且ago只能作副词.此处应是ago.
2.when改为that 考查固定搭配.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.
3.Therefore改为However 考查副词.however表示转折,尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时,表示转折,其意为"可是""仍然"等.可放在句首、句中或句末,通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开.
4.entire改为entirely 考查副词.disappear是动词,要用副词修饰,形容词entire的副词是entirely.
5.become改为became 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是已发生的事情,要用一般过去时态.
6.reason改为reasons 考查名词.reason是可数名词,其前有数词修饰时要用复数形式.
7.was改为were 考查主谓一致.主语the forests是复数,谓语动词也应用复数形式,助动词用were.
8.with改为for 考查固定搭配.make way for意为"为…腾出地方",是固定搭配.
9.去掉too 考查词语用法.too…to…句型为"too+形容词或副词+to do…"译为"太…而不能…",它在形式上是肯定的,但在意义上是否定的.而此处并非表示否定,而是"他们很好吃",too是多余的,要去掉.
10.加to 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式表示目的.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.