题目内容
20.下面短文中共有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I had a interesting dream last night.I dreamed that I took part in a race.At first,I could not to run very fast and fell behind.So I didn't lose heart and kept running.All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on!"I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners.I felt as if flying like a superman.In the end,I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.Many of my classmate threw me up into the air.Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!
分析 本文主要讲述作者参加了赛跑比赛.起先,作者跑得不是很快,但并没有失去信心,操场上的同学都在为作者鼓劲.于是,作者跑得越来越快,最终追了上来,获得了第一名.作者为此感到自豪,正在那里,作者醒了,发现自己还在床上.
解答 I had a interesting dream last night.I dreamed that I took part in a race.At first,I could not to run very fast and fell behind.So I didn't lose heart and kept running.All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on!"I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up∧all the other runners.I felt as if flying like a superman.In the end,I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.Many of my classmate threw me up into the air.Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!
详解:
1.a改为an 考查冠词.dream是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指,因interesting读音以发元音开头,用不定冠词an.
2.去掉to 考查情态动词.情态动词后面直接接动词原形.
3.So改为But 前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非因果关系,用连词but.
4.cheer改为cheered 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
5.encouraging改为encouraged 考查过去分词.过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
6.fast改为faster 考查副词比较级.faster and faster意为"越来越快",都应该使用比较级.
7.加with 考查固定搭配.catch up with意为"追上,赶上",是固定搭配.
8.proudly改为proud 考查形容词.feel是连系动词,后接形容词作表语.
9.classmate改为classmates 考查名词复数.many of…意为"许多…"后接名词要用复数形式.
10.me改为myself 考查代词.根据句意:发现自己还在床上.用反身代词myself.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | lay; lay; lain | B. | lay; lied; laid | ||
C. | lied; lay; laid | D. | lied; laid; lain |
I was better at my (24)D.My teacher had told my parents that I had great (25)D.So my parents found the best piano teacher in the area to (26)B me.But the only time he was (27)Awas Saturday afternoons at 3P.m.Back then,I was (28)C about the British TV show"The Avengers",which was (29)A every Saturday at 3P.p.m.I let nothing take up my"Avengers"hour.So I (30)D this amazing opportunity.Today,I don't even have a (31)C in my house.
My sister became an engineer,but she (32)Cstopped making music.When she was in her 40s,she switched (转换) (33)B.She went back to college,got a (34)A in music education,and became a music teacher.She starts kids out on their first instrument and gives them all the encouragement and support she never (35)D.
Recently,she and a pianist pal put on a recital(音乐独奏会).A big crowd of friends and family (36)D for her.As she played,I looked around at the (37)A.Everyone was (38)Cenjoying the music.It occurred to me that I was the only person who remembered that 7-year-old kid making those perfectly (39)B sounds and knew how far she had come,despite(40)B.
Talent is important.But enthusiasm is even more important.
21.A.admit | B.advance | C.quit(停止) | D.improve |
22.A.attend | B.join | C.leave | D.visit |
23.A.admired | B.lacked(缺乏) | C.had | D.instrument(仪器) |
24.A.major | B.project | C.composition | D.instrument |
25.A.ambition(雄心 ) | B.patience | C.enthusiasm | D.potential(潜力) |
26.A.examine | B.train | C.Correct | D.challenge |
27.A.available(有空的) | B.punctual(守时的) | C.skillful | D.occupied |
28.A.sensitive | B.serious | C.crazy | D.particular |
29.A.aired(播送) | B.filmed | C.Designed | D.commented评论 |
30.A.grasped | B.valued | C.waited for | D.turned down |
31.A.book | B.play | C.piano | D.violin |
32.A.already | B.even | C.never | D.once |
33.A.attitudes | B.careers(职业) | C.plans | D.positions |
34.A.degree | B.chance | C.scholarship | D.sponsor赞助商 |
35.A.expected | B.provided | C.imagined | D.received |
36.A.paid off | B.showed off | C.stayed up | D.turned up |
37.A.audience | B.students | C.spotlights | D.platform |
38.A.appropriately(适当地) | B.anxiou sly | C.obviously | D.desperately绝望地 |
39.A.sweet | B.awful | C.powerful | D.unique |
40.A.everybody | B.everything | C.something | D.somebody |
A. | where | B. | when | C. | what | D. | which |
A. | will give | B. | would have given | ||
C. | must give | D. | should have given |