题目内容
【题目】假设你是晨光中学的李津。你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展以 “Changes in Our Life”为题的征文活动。要求同学们谈一谈这些年来,在生活方 面发生的、使人们受益的变化。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)描述生活上发生的变化(两个方面);
(2)这些变化给人们带来的好处;
(3)相信未来生活更加美好。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes in Our Life
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By Li Jin
【答案】Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.As for the modern network technology, I think we have experienced it. We can shop online and keep abreast of the news and events at home and abroad.As for the mode of transportation, with the improvement of living standard, people pay more attention to green travel, Shared bikes and some public transportation tools are becoming very popular.
These changes make our life more convenient and greatly improve work efficiency and life efficiency.It is also more in line with the concept of environmental protection.
I believe that through the efforts of our generation, we will make life better and happier.
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生谈一谈这些年来,在生活方面发生的、使人们受益的变化。
第一步:审题
类别:提纲类
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.描述生活上发生的变化(两个方面);
2. 表明变化给人们带来的好处;
3.表达相信未来生活更加美好之情。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Change; take place; modern network technology; transportation mode; As for; experience; shop online; keep abreast of; at home and abroad; living standard; pay more attention to; Shared bikes; environmental protection;
第三步:连词成句
1. Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.
2. We can shop online and keep abreast of the news and events at home and abroad.
3. with the improvement of living standard, people pay more attention to green travel.
4. Shared bikes and some public transportation tools are becoming very popular.
5. These changes make our life more convenient and greatly improve work efficiency and life efficiency.
6. It is also more in line with the concept of environmental protection.
7. I believe that through the efforts of our generation, we will make life better and happier.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改